Score: 10

"Disturbing and gratifying"

submission: Objectionable Apparatus

date: May 17, 2009

It reminded me of the grafitti art from 99rooms. This was great. I'm curious if you made a storyboard to map out the plot beforehand or if you just let it evolve as you made it? I truly enjoyed color scheme, animation, characters and the audio was fitting. Seriously, good work.

Score: 3

"Hmmm"

submission: vigilance 5

date: May 10, 2009

While your story is getting better, your animation could do with some updates. In fact, there isn't much animation at all, just a lot of the same drawings you've used over and over again. Same front shot of face, same shadowing figure in doorway, same shot leaning over from side. It is making the series seem stale.

Score: 9

"Quite enjoyable"

submission: KB - Back To The Front

date: May 10, 2009

I liked how you paired scene changes with the changes within the music. SImple and yet lots of detail. I liked the mix of still shots along with the animation. Good job.