Score: 10

"Disturbing and gratifying"

submission: Objectionable Apparatus

date: May 17, 2009

It reminded me of the grafitti art from 99rooms. This was great. I'm curious if you made a storyboard to map out the plot beforehand or if you just let it evolve as you made it? I truly enjoyed color scheme, animation, characters and the audio was fitting. Seriously, good work.

Score: 3

"Hmmm"

submission: vigilance 5

date: May 10, 2009

While your story is getting better, your animation could do with some updates. In fact, there isn't much animation at all, just a lot of the same drawings you've used over and over again. Same front shot of face, same shadowing figure in doorway, same shot leaning over from side. It is making the series seem stale.

Score: 9

"Quite enjoyable"

submission: KB - Back To The Front

date: May 10, 2009

I liked how you paired scene changes with the changes within the music. SImple and yet lots of detail. I liked the mix of still shots along with the animation. Good job.

Score: 10

"Yet again, a winner"

submission: Cat Face 8

date: May 3, 2009

I love this series!
"Who doesn't?"
You keep them short and funny, you have enough characters that they don't get stale and you don't run gags into the ground. I'm definitely going to check out all your other shorts.

Score: 10

"The end PSA"

submission: Cat Face 4

date: May 3, 2009

The end of each episode makes me laugh with Cat Face's little public service announcements about recyclying or eating greens. Great job!

Score: 7

"You keep improving, good job"

submission: A Lost City Pt. 3 (test)

date: August 6, 2008

I had hoped this one would be longer. You sense of perspective and movement has gotten better. I've always liked how you portrayed your main character with the facial expressions and I love the story behind why he is doing this. Ends up not being just pointless violence. But maybe a longer animation for each part. As this one goes, it seems a little less fluid in the storyline. I hope you keep making these.

Score: 8

"Very well done"

submission: TDIII Official Trailer

date: March 19, 2005

It was nice to see a real trailer type promo for a movie on NG. I also loved the choice of classic NG background music.

Score: 3

"In all seriousness"

submission: deleteMC04

date: January 23, 2005

You really shouldn't use written/typed words if you can't spell. It takes away from what little talent you have going for yourself graphically. Just so you know, the contraction "I'm" stands for "I am" not "am I." As in "Where am I?" instead of "Where I am?" I won't even begin to complain about the moral (?) at the end of the story.

Score: 8

"Mini tributes galore!"

submission: "Waterman" Ep. VI

date: January 23, 2005

That was amazing how you worked in Waterman grabbing onto the owl, made me think of Legand of Zelda. Great idea on how to mix it up a little with the black&white 1926 film. It still had all the great waterman elements too.

Score: 8

"nice combination of diff styles of animation"

submission: weird_project

date: January 16, 2005

Very good work. I especially liked when the view from outside the building pivoted. You have a talent for expressing things that are difficult to put into written word.